1.Interesting start but unrealistic. Then I think beard guy
means threat of livelihood that make author to write story but maybe not.
2. high humidity in summer reminds climates in my hometown. It
has lot of humidity at summer and I hate that humidity because it makes me
irritated.
And ABBA reminds me familiar feeling to me because I
listened lot of ABBA’s song when I was young.
Last paragraph also reminds me a time when I start to draw
something. Sometimes I draw things just for practice but it doesn’t have
anything inside. Even if I try to think something it’s just a fake. But sometime, an image is spark in my head so
I transfer that image in to a paper. It doesn’t happen often and I can’t control
it. But the painting I drawing in that
way seems have something meaning to me. Sometimes I think that’s the thing I
can do. it just reminds me that time.
3. I was learned to draw comics so I will change into comic
book. First I can change a sentence to visual image like characters’ motion and
facial expression also I can draw actual beard to the man instead of telling he
has a beard. I can make pizza delivery suddenly comes in when the page is flip
and I can draw delicious pizza with half pineabble hafe anchovy.